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The Rending by ~artistic-technology:iconartistic-technology:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Erotic > Fixed


Your love is a precious lie.
Your moans are my desires.
My fingers wrap themselves in your hair.

Your touch is a gentle toxin.
My eyes consume your lips
Your cries are my breathe.

Your sex is a tender death.
My body invades your thighs.
Your longing takes me in.
©2006-2009 ~artistic-technology
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Author's Comments

First in a long time.

Fixed: Shuffle Stacked.

Go figure, right?

There is a point where desire, deception, and destruction meet.

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~La-La-Lola-Lolita Aug 30, 2006, 1:45:20 PM
This is bloody amazing. Seriously, wow. I love it to pieces. :+favlove:

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Hansel: Jesus says the darndest things.
Hedwig: [slaps Hansel] Don't you ever mention that name to me again.
Hansel: But he died for our sins.
Hedwig: So did Hitler!
Hansel: Eh?
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~artistic-technology Aug 30, 2006, 1:48:26 PM
Thank you very much.

I have a couple thought rattling around in my head, but I'm not sure what I'll do with it or if it'll be viewable by everyone.

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There's freedom in the knowledge that you have taken everything.
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~wineglass Aug 30, 2006, 1:51:17 PM
Nyaaaaaaah!

*love**love*

I've missed your work so so much!!!

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Look Closer.
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~artistic-technology Aug 30, 2006, 1:52:01 PM
Wow. It's great to see old friends coming out of the woodwork.

Thanks!

*hug*

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There's freedom in the knowledge that you have taken everything.
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~freyja1984 Aug 30, 2006, 1:56:02 PM
wow... this is just ... *bows* Good to have you back hun. You've been missed much ^^. I like the way you worked this one. It's simple yet so full of emotion. Great work *hugs*
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~artistic-technology Aug 30, 2006, 1:59:30 PM
"We should all have a dime for every stupid thing the president has done.
We'd be filthy rich right now."

And then you'd have motivation to vote for him again.

Thanks for the kind words. It's kinda nice to be back. Hopefully I'll be able to keep things going this time.

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There's freedom in the knowledge that you have taken everything.
:iconla-la-lola-lolita:
~La-La-Lola-Lolita Aug 30, 2006, 2:01:56 PM
You're most welcome.

I always like to see work from you, so I'd love to read, but obviously that choice is ultimately up to you. I'm currently trying to write a story, but things aren't going too well heh.

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Hansel: Jesus says the darndest things.
Hedwig: [slaps Hansel] Don't you ever mention that name to me again.
Hansel: But he died for our sins.
Hedwig: So did Hitler!
Hansel: Eh?
:iconartistic-technology:
~artistic-technology Aug 30, 2006, 2:03:06 PM
What gives?

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There's freedom in the knowledge that you have taken everything.
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~litlumanuth Aug 30, 2006, 2:05:02 PM
i love it :)

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'i am attempting to kill, the little boy inside.'
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~artistic-technology Aug 30, 2006, 2:05:49 PM
Thanks.

Good to see you again.

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There's freedom in the knowledge that you have taken everything.
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